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  1. Posted: September 2, 2013In: Public

    Young William Randolph Hearst goes to war against an ageing Joseph Pulitzer as each tries to monopolize coverage of a mysterious homicide capturing New York?s imagination, birthing the modern concept of sensationalist media coverage.

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    Added an answer on September 4, 2013 at 3:08 pm

    PROS - A unique story. - Clear goal. CONS - Passive protagonist elements. The real story would be better perceived from the murderer's P.O.V. - High budget/period piece. With a few more re-writes, the writer could have addressed the underlying story problems that face this from being a knockout of aRead more

    PROS
    – A unique story.
    – Clear goal.

    CONS
    – Passive protagonist elements. The real story would be better perceived from the murderer’s P.O.V.
    – High budget/period piece.

    With a few more re-writes, the writer could have addressed the underlying story problems that face this from being a knockout of a logline/story. The real concern is having the protagonist(s) observe the real story that if not handled correctly could be its own downfall. Hopefully the focus is put on the sabotage of each individual and their respective media outlets.

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  2. Posted: September 2, 2013In: Public

    Following the outbreak of a virus that wipes out the majority of the human population, a teen documents her family?s new life in quarantine and tries to protect her infected sister.

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    Added an answer on September 4, 2013 at 2:59 pm

    PROS - Strong visual event. - Impending confrontation with close relationship. CONS - Doesn't clearly specify use of found footage element. - Lack of specific goal other than to survive. The writer demonstrates an innate ability to deliver the story from their perspective but leads to a watered downRead more

    PROS
    – Strong visual event.
    – Impending confrontation with close relationship.

    CONS
    – Doesn’t clearly specify use of found footage element.
    – Lack of specific goal other than to survive.

    The writer demonstrates an innate ability to deliver the story from their perspective but leads to a watered down logline that may cause issues with producers who are looking to check every element beforehand.

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  3. Posted: August 16, 2013In: Public

    When a village is plagued by beetles that eat colour, an artist grieving the loss of his daughter ventures into the nearby jungle to save a flower which is the only source of a certain shade of blue.

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    Added an answer on August 18, 2013 at 9:01 pm

    I love this dude, well done. I hope one day I can see this.

    I love this dude, well done. I hope one day I can see this.

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