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(1930 – rural France) While growing up, a solitary boy, tries to make sense of life by making toy models of the world around him. The chance encounters he has with a roaming peddler changes his look on life forever.
The key to a good logline is creating a story, not theme. No need to include (1930 - rural France). We know the boy is going to grow up, and also instead of saying "tries to make sense..." you could convey it quicker and easier with " When a confused, solitary boy starts making toys, he encounters aRead more
The key to a good logline is creating a story, not theme. No need to include (1930 – rural France).
We know the boy is going to grow up, and also instead of saying “tries to make sense…” you could convey it quicker and easier with ” When a confused, solitary boy starts making toys, he encounters a gypsy peddler that changes his outlook.”. Try to be direct and simplify your idea, this helps the reader to relate and understand your idea / concept stronger and quicker.
I hope this helps : )
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"When three generations of superheroes attempt to reconcile with one another..." I would like this to develop into a concise logline, with more information relating to the idea. Good concept, look forward to seeing the improved logline : )
“When three generations of superheroes attempt to reconcile with one another…”
I would like this to develop into a concise logline, with more information relating to the idea.
See lessGood concept, look forward to seeing the improved logline : )