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  1. Posted: December 22, 2012In: Public

    Four over-educated slacker's from Seattle lose at life and love, until Oscar meets the woman of his dreams.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on December 22, 2012 at 3:24 pm

    "When an academic slacker meets the woman of his dreams, he attempts to overcome failing at life and love, before he losses her forever." Its not important to include the allies, names or location. This will all come out in the script. A simple logline will help you not get cluttered further down thRead more

    “When an academic slacker meets the woman of his dreams,
    he attempts to overcome failing at life and love, before he losses her forever.”

    Its not important to include the allies, names or location. This will all come out in the script.

    A simple logline will help you not get cluttered further down the screen writing road and also determine if you have a concise concept. : )

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  2. Posted: December 17, 2012In: Public

    When an idealistic free spirit discovers his best friend is terminally ill, he must inspire her through music to live, before she gives up hope.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on December 21, 2012 at 5:56 pm

    "When an idealistic free spirit discovers his best friend is terminally ill, he attempts to inspire her through music, before she gives up hope." What is the term telegraphed? I've never heard it before :) How do I adress a clue for the lesson and also a hint of a specific goal?

    “When an idealistic free spirit discovers his best friend is terminally ill,
    he attempts to inspire her through music, before she gives up hope.”

    What is the term telegraphed? I’ve never heard it before 🙂

    How do I adress a clue for the lesson and also a hint of a specific goal?

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  3. Posted: December 20, 2012In: Public

    When a flourishing actress plans to murder her teenage heartthrob, she sleeps her way through Hollywood, before his final Premier.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on December 21, 2012 at 5:49 pm

    It's a Lolita-esqu neo noir with black dramedy elements : ) "When an obsessed actress..." Time to hit the think tank again as I feel the concept is plagued by confusing elements and mediocrity. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and pushing me to do better :D p.s Im still keeping the name!

    It’s a Lolita-esqu neo noir with black dramedy elements : )

    “When an obsessed actress…”

    Time to hit the think tank again as I feel the concept is plagued by confusing elements and mediocrity. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and pushing me to do better 😀 p.s Im still keeping the name!

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