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By simply touching someone, Lissa can tell who their true love is, but it doesn't work on her. As she rises in popularity, Skeptic Magazine sends out their top reporter, Tom, a naturally handsome man, for the story. He soon discovers her to be much more interesting than her story. But after a lifetime of heartbreak, Lissa wants nothing to do with him. Right?
"When a heartbroken clairvoyant is interviewed by a skeptical journalist, she must (insert goal), before he finishes the story." Try to simplify the process down to the basics and to keep it under 25 words or less. Remember to only include the most important facts that create a solid foundation.
“When a heartbroken clairvoyant is interviewed by a skeptical journalist,
she must (insert goal), before he finishes the story.”
Try to simplify the process down to the basics and to keep it under 25 words or less.
Remember to only include the most important facts that create a solid foundation.
See lessWhen a stripper learns the exact date of her death from a mysterious patron, she seeks to tie up the loose ends and find meaning in her life.
"When an (insert weakness) stripper learns the exact time of her death, she attempts to tie up loose ends before she fails finding meaning in her life." - This is only a suggestion : ) Remember the 3 most important things GSU. G = Goal, S = Stakes, U = Urgency. There isn't a reason to include "...aRead more
“When an (insert weakness) stripper learns the exact time of her death, she attempts to tie up loose ends before she fails finding meaning in her life.” – This is only a suggestion : )
Remember the 3 most important things GSU. G = Goal, S = Stakes, U = Urgency.
There isn’t a reason to include “…a mysterious patron as” its not important to the logline.
Sounds like a cool idea but could it benefit from a specific goal instead of loose ends?
Finding meaning works well but could there be something bigger against her?
See lessWhen a flourishing actress plans to murder her teenage heartthrob, she sleeps her way through Hollywood, before his final Premier.
She is an obsessive who wants only him for herself. He was her first teen love / heart-throb and the reason she became an actress. She has to sleep her way through the Hollywood hills, connecting the dots to get to him. I want to change the ticking clock too as I feel there needs to be more urgency.Read more
She is an obsessive who wants only him for herself. He was her first teen love / heart-throb and the reason she became an actress. She has to sleep her way through the Hollywood hills, connecting the dots to get to him. I want to change the ticking clock too as I feel there needs to be more urgency.
Sure am. If the blacklist can say fuck count me in. : )
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