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  1. Posted: March 5, 2013In: Public

    In a near future where nothing is safe from corporate logos, a burnt out advertising worker rebels when his company markets his new born child.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on March 6, 2013 at 6:37 am

    Just a heads up: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HInOg12jMiY BRANDED TRAILER 1 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SKUTs3w9LEk BRANDED TRAILER 2 The concept sounds similar and its also called "Branded".

    Just a heads up:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HInOg12jMiY BRANDED TRAILER 1
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SKUTs3w9LEk BRANDED TRAILER 2

    The concept sounds similar and its also called “Branded”.

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  2. Posted: March 4, 2013In: Public

    A materialistic sell-sword is sent to discover what had stopped the flow of magic that runs the city, but when he learns that the source of the power is the harvested souls of his race, he fights the king to liberate his people.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on March 5, 2013 at 12:18 pm

    One goal could help/define his weakness. This could be done with the liberating connection and would be what he, as a character has to overcome. Which is a result of: The main goal. Trying to discover and reconnect the power supply. It sounds like the switch in the middle is a natural progression anRead more

    One goal could help/define his weakness.
    This could be done with the liberating connection and would be what he,
    as a character has to overcome. Which is a result of:
    The main goal. Trying to discover and reconnect the power supply.

    It sounds like the switch in the middle is a natural progression and not left of field. The only reason to try and include a midpoint is if its a change of character.

    Take the recent movie “Side Effects”
    http://scriptshadow.net/movie-review-side-effects/

    This may be worth the read and help you find the answer your looking for. 😀

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  3. Posted: March 4, 2013In: Public

    A materialistic sell-sword is sent to discover what had stopped the flow of magic that runs the city, but when he learns that the source of the power is the harvested souls of his race, he fights the king to liberate his people.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on March 4, 2013 at 9:20 pm

    "After discovering souls being harvested for power from a once magical city, a materialistic sell-sword quests to liberate his people from a maniacal king." Just trimmed it down to help :D Sounds like a cool concept with plenty of angles to discover. Good luck.

    “After discovering souls being harvested for power from a once magical city,
    a materialistic sell-sword quests to liberate his people from a maniacal king.”

    Just trimmed it down to help 😀

    Sounds like a cool concept with plenty of angles to discover. Good luck.

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