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In the time of a great civil war, a young man is positioned in a tower alone where he must fight for survival with very few supplies, and a sniper rifle.
"During the battle of Dublin, a lone republican soldier must defend his post from advancing enemy troops before his supplies run dry with only a sniper at hand. " Hope this helps. :D
“During the battle of Dublin, a lone republican soldier must defend his post from advancing enemy troops before his supplies run dry with only a sniper at hand. ”
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While six devious school teachers celebrate their yearly retreat..."
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See lessA fast-talking drifter recruits a supernatural team to help him steal Pandora?s Box from Lucifer, in order to be reinstated as heaven?s Angel of Darkness.
REMEMBER GSU G = Goal S = Stakes U = Urgency In an Indiana Jones movies, we don't know if or what the object is until the end. What if the drifter is trying to steal Lucifers soul? Theres nothing the drifter is risking to make this happen. Why does he need to be reinstated? He already doesn't have tRead more
REMEMBER GSU
G = Goal
S = Stakes
U = Urgency
In an Indiana Jones movies, we don’t know if or what the object is until the end.
What if the drifter is trying to steal Lucifers soul?
Theres nothing the drifter is risking to make this happen. Why does he need to be reinstated?
He already doesn’t have the box and it comes across that he is doing it because he feels like it.
What if someone close to the drifter is at stake? This ups the ante and makes us cheer for him.
There is currently no urgency.
What if he isn’t reinstated, what is the outcome? Is it life changing? World changing?
“After his daughter is sent to hell, a fast-talking drifter must steal Lucifers soul to become the next lord of hell and free her before the next full moon.”
This is a quick example to demonstrate.
I like the title and you have the start of a good concept. WIth a little work it could be great.
Hope this helps 😀
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