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A patriotic soldier is left behind after a failed mission to destroy a stash of explosives in a Middle Eastern village. He befriends a little girl who help him survive and make him see the effects of the war and when his team comes back to wipe out the entire village, he is forced to pick a side.
"Abandoned by his platoon, a patriotic soldier is forced to defend the Afghanistan village he failed to destroy after befriending a muslim girl." Hope this helps. :D Keep it short and simple (K.I.S.S.) Whittle your idea to its purest concept. Movies are based around conflict and improve your loglineRead more
“Abandoned by his platoon, a patriotic soldier is forced to defend the Afghanistan village he failed to destroy after befriending a muslim girl.”
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Keep it short and simple (K.I.S.S.)
Whittle your idea to its purest concept.
Movies are based around conflict and improve your logline tenfold.
You said middle eastern but by saying Afghanistan it gives the reader familiarity and also taboo.
If the girl is living in the middle east, is she muslim ?? It adds depth by having two opposing forces fight for the same goal and reflects the primal instinct in humanity.
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"Accidentally stealing the identity of a quiz show host, a cannibal eskimo gives the audience more than what they could chew."
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