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  1. Posted: March 14, 2013In: Public

    When an ambitious young physicist gets hold of old documents written by Nikola Tesla in Croatia, he finds Tesla?s plans to provide everyone in the world with energy obtained from merely particles in the air. He decides to travel to the US to learn more, but he soon understands that there are a lot of people who wants to stop his hunt for the free energy.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on March 14, 2013 at 1:02 am

    "Discovering Nikola Telsa?s blueprints for free energy, an ambitious physicist must stay alive long enough to develop a prototype while evading the Government of two nations." Hope this helps. :D

    “Discovering Nikola Telsa?s blueprints for free energy, an ambitious physicist must stay alive long enough to develop a prototype while evading the Government of two nations.”

    Hope this helps. 😀

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  2. Posted: March 13, 2013In: Public

    After a grisly string of murders, a museum security guard suspects the recent acquisition of a mysterious Egyptian artifact.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on March 13, 2013 at 11:01 pm

    I like where its going but as timmyelliot said, we would love to read G.S.U. G = Goal. What does the guard have to do ?? Suspecting is one scene (2-3 pages) out of 110 pages. S = Stakes. Why is the character risking it ?? A guard wants to protect, is there something bigger ?? Maybe involve the guardRead more

    I like where its going but as timmyelliot said, we would love to read G.S.U.

    G = Goal. What does the guard have to do ?? Suspecting is one scene (2-3 pages) out of 110 pages.

    S = Stakes. Why is the character risking it ?? A guard wants to protect, is there something bigger ??
    Maybe involve the guard working nightshift and their kid is asleep home alone. What is the guard risking ??

    U = Urgency. Why now ?? Why is the guard doing what they do in this moment ?? Like I mentioned earlier, a ticking clock gives us a deadline.
    the guard has to be home before the child is going to the hospital for their monthly dialysis.

    Hope this helps. 😀

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  3. Posted: March 13, 2013In: Public

    When a prude housewife's perfect son goes missing, his secret life as a gigolo is revealed and the mother decides to pose as a prostitute in order to infiltrate the underground world and find out what happened to her son.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on March 13, 2013 at 10:55 pm

    "Posing as a prostitute, a moral housewife penetrates the underground sex trade to find her missing gigolo son." Hope this helps. :D Keep us, the reader interested and get to the point as quick as possible. A logline helps define and clarify the idea // concept, and also helps sell // market.

    “Posing as a prostitute, a moral housewife penetrates the underground sex trade to find her missing gigolo son.”

    Hope this helps. 😀

    Keep us, the reader interested and get to the point as quick as possible.

    A logline helps define and clarify the idea // concept, and also helps sell // market.

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