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  1. Posted: March 15, 2013

    A tortured former artist, now a compassionate young counselor, has dedicated his life to helping other misfortunate souls. As the troubles of a difficult past continues to cause harm, another life he struggles harder to save is just as important to him as his own?

    Tracy_J Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 16, 2013 at 10:58 am

    Rewrite: A tortured former artist, now a compassionate young crisis counselor, struggles to save another?s life from alcohol abuse in the wake of facing his own past as a victim of sexual abuse.

    Rewrite: A tortured former artist, now a compassionate young crisis counselor, struggles to save another?s life from alcohol abuse in the wake of facing his own past as a victim of sexual abuse.

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  2. Posted: March 15, 2013

    A tortured former artist, now a compassionate young counselor, has dedicated his life to helping other misfortunate souls. As the troubles of a difficult past continues to cause harm, another life he struggles harder to save is just as important to him as his own?

    Tracy_J Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 16, 2013 at 5:56 am

    Thanks, Tor. I have been reviewing and rewriting that line forever and I am still not hitting the mark with it. I suppose i am trying to be as specific as I can without giving too much away because I am still thinking in novel writing terms. I will work on this more. Thank you.

    Thanks, Tor. I have been reviewing and rewriting that line forever and I am still not hitting the mark with it. I suppose i am trying to be as specific as I can without giving too much away because I am still thinking in novel writing terms. I will work on this more. Thank you.

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  3. Posted: March 15, 2013

    Accused of a crime for revenge, a sensitive, feminine male struggles to keep his sanity while incarcerated in a small town county jail fully inhabited by a variety of unpredictable strangers.

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    Added an answer on March 16, 2013 at 5:51 am

    Thank you, Kriss. Your response to the logline says that for the most part, my description worked and I can say that you actually know what the whole story is about. Thank you again.

    Thank you, Kriss. Your response to the logline says that for the most part, my description worked and I can say that you actually know what the whole story is about. Thank you again.

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