1. Posted: March 15, 2013In:

    After the gruesome murder of his wife, a man takes the only logical choice he has; become the monster that destroyed his life. wearing the faces of his victims, the town goes into a frenzy to figure out who is the man behind the masks.

    Tracy_J Penpusher

    I see two stories in this logline. The man who has lost his wife, horribly, and becomes a killer himself, and the story of his wife's killer. I think the last line should reflect on that.

    I see two stories in this logline. The man who has lost his wife, horribly, and becomes a killer himself, and the story of his wife’s killer. I think the last line should reflect on that.

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  2. Posted: March 6, 2013In:

    A fast-talking drifter recruits a supernatural team to help him steal Pandora?s Box from Lucifer, in order to be reinstated as heaven?s Angel of Darkness.

    Tracy_J Penpusher

    I like this idea. It is close to something I would likely read in novel form as well.

    I like this idea. It is close to something I would likely read in novel form as well.

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  3. Posted: March 13, 2013In:

    When a prude housewife's perfect son goes missing, his secret life as a gigolo is revealed and the mother decides to pose as a prostitute in order to infiltrate the underground world and find out what happened to her son.

    Tracy_J Penpusher

    I like Tor Dollhouse's suggestion. It gets right to the heart of the matter by using fewer words.

    I like Tor Dollhouse’s suggestion. It gets right to the heart of the matter by using fewer words.

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