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  1. Posted: March 15, 2013

    Accused of a crime for revenge, a sensitive, feminine male struggles to keep his sanity while incarcerated in a small town county jail fully inhabited by a variety of unpredictable strangers.

    Tracy_J Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 17, 2013 at 6:31 am

    Considering that most responses are focusing on the ?accused of a crime for revenge? part, which is actually an important lead into the story and means exactly what it says, I thought I could delete that part altogether. But without that line, the post seems naked to me. The central story is mainlyRead more

    Considering that most responses are focusing on the ?accused of a crime for revenge? part, which is actually an important lead into the story and means exactly what it says, I thought I could delete that part altogether. But without that line, the post seems naked to me. The central story is mainly about the sensitive inmate and how he tries to keep his sanity while in jail for the first time and at the mercy of unknown strangers.

    Thanks for the advice. It really helps to look at this again with an outside point of view. :o)

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  2. Posted: March 12, 2013In: Public

    After critiquing a bunch of other people's loglines, an optimistic screenwriter must improve his own poorly written ideas or wallow in unemployment forever. But what seems like a simple task soon reveals itself to be much harder than first anticipated …

    Tracy_J Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 16, 2013 at 4:30 pm

    Giggles.

    Giggles.

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  3. Posted: March 16, 2013In: Public

    When a biochemical corporation manufactures implants that help millions live longer, they go from pariah to savior. But a longstanding critic remains unconvinced, and must battle the corporation and its backers to uncover the shocking secret behind the technology.

    Tracy_J Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 16, 2013 at 4:26 pm

    As I am reading more log lines, I find that is is very important to get your point across in as fewer words as possible. From an outside view, I believe that is possible with what you have already written here.

    As I am reading more log lines, I find that is is very important to get your point across in as fewer words as possible. From an outside view, I believe that is possible with what you have already written here.

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