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Accused of a crime for revenge, a sensitive, feminine male struggles to keep his sanity while incarcerated in a small town county jail fully inhabited by a variety of unpredictable strangers.
Considering that most responses are focusing on the ?accused of a crime for revenge? part, which is actually an important lead into the story and means exactly what it says, I thought I could delete that part altogether. But without that line, the post seems naked to me. The central story is mainlyRead more
Considering that most responses are focusing on the ?accused of a crime for revenge? part, which is actually an important lead into the story and means exactly what it says, I thought I could delete that part altogether. But without that line, the post seems naked to me. The central story is mainly about the sensitive inmate and how he tries to keep his sanity while in jail for the first time and at the mercy of unknown strangers.
Thanks for the advice. It really helps to look at this again with an outside point of view. :o)
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As I am reading more log lines, I find that is is very important to get your point across in as fewer words as possible. From an outside view, I believe that is possible with what you have already written here.
As I am reading more log lines, I find that is is very important to get your point across in as fewer words as possible. From an outside view, I believe that is possible with what you have already written here.
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