1. Posted: June 26, 2022In:

    An impulsive 14-year-old goes to epic lengths and sparks a national emergency trying to find case of beer to impress his older brother.

    tschrack Penpusher

    Thanks so much!

    Thanks so much!

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  2. Posted: June 26, 2022In:

    An impulsive 14-year-old goes to epic lengths and sparks a national emergency trying to find case of beer to impress his older brother.

    tschrack Penpusher

    To impress his older brother, an impulsive teen goes to epic lengths and sparks a national emergency trying to find case of beer for him.

    To impress his older brother, an impulsive teen goes to epic lengths and sparks a national emergency trying to find case of beer for him.

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  3. Posted: June 26, 2022In:

    An impulsive 14-year-old goes to epic lengths and sparks a national emergency trying to find case of beer to impress his older brother.

    tschrack Penpusher

    Thanks Ben! Do you think it's stronger starting with "To impress his older brother?" That does announce the stakes right off the bat... I also like teen more than 14-year-old... I assume you agree?

    Thanks Ben! Do you think it’s stronger starting with “To impress his older brother?” That does announce the stakes right off the bat… I also like teen more than 14-year-old… I assume you agree?

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