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  1. Posted: January 5, 2022In: Television

    After her estranged father’s death, a free-spirited activist must return to her political roots and take her place in her family’s business of corporate law.

    TullyArcher Samurai
    Added an answer on January 15, 2022 at 12:40 pm

    Why "must" she?

    Why “must” she?

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  2. Posted: July 10, 2018In: Drama

    A jailed former wrestler, gets another chance in the spotlight by putting on wrestling shows in prison, but after his early parole, he struggles to cope without it.

    TullyArcher Samurai
    Added an answer on July 11, 2018 at 2:20 am

    This sounds like a comedy to me. One I would enjoy! But you said "drama", sooooo... I see from your comments that maybe you're not clear on the tone of it? It's point?A straight to point B. Had limelight, wants it, commits a crime to go back to jail. Where's the MOVIE? What's act 2? I mean, it's notRead more

    This sounds like a comedy to me. One I would enjoy! But you said “drama”, sooooo… I see from your comments that maybe you’re not clear on the tone of it? It’s point?A straight to point B. Had limelight, wants it, commits a crime to go back to jail. Where’s the MOVIE? What’s act 2? I mean, it’s not hard to commit a crime, you just do it. So like… what’s the struggle? What’s the EMOTIONAL struggle?

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  3. Posted: July 11, 2018In: SciFi

    Revision 2: A telepath must install a countermeasure in a guarded government facility, before an anti-telepath weapon is launched.

    TullyArcher Samurai
    Added an answer on July 11, 2018 at 1:50 am

    There's a line under your logline. Under that, another line. Between those two lines, if you hover, three buttons will appear on the right. One of those is your edit button. You could also have added the new logline in a comment underneath the original, like you did on this one for "I kept the attacRead more

    There’s a line under your logline. Under that, another line. Between those two lines, if you hover, three buttons will appear on the right. One of those is your edit button. You could also have added the new logline in a comment underneath the original, like you did on this one for “I kept the attack on the whole city”.

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