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A detective being investigated on historic corruption charges becomes an ideal candidate for an off-the books assignment to locate missing evidence.
What are "HISTORIC corruption charges"? And as others have said, this is set up. I have no idea if he even takes the assignment, yanno? :-)
What are “HISTORIC corruption charges”? And as others have said, this is set up. I have no idea if he even takes the assignment, yanno? 🙂
See lessWhen a con man discovers he has a 14-year old daughter, he struggles to bond with her while shielding her from his criminal occupation.
The logline doesn't suggest an ending. I see above that you've got some trickery going on (fun) but still, the logline should give me some idea about what the character is primarily DOING and here, what it boils down to is bonding and shielding, which could go on forever, which makes it sound boringRead more
The logline doesn’t suggest an ending. I see above that you’ve got some trickery going on (fun) but still, the logline should give me some idea about what the character is primarily DOING and here, what it boils down to is bonding and shielding, which could go on forever, which makes it sound boring.
See lessLOGLINE FOR A ‘PSYCH-THRILLER’ In order to restore virtue following a discriminatory arrest, a gutsy but ill-fated escort-worker must withstand and negotiate her way through, the next 24 hours locked-down alongside a parasitic anti-social, who evidently knows more about her than she should.
If the arrest was discriminatory as opposed to just, then why does she need to restore virtue? I could see having to restore reputation, but virtue isn't why she was arrested, is it? "gutsy but ill-fated", what does that mean? she's gutsy but we should know from the get go that this won't end well fRead more
If the arrest was discriminatory as opposed to just, then why does she need to restore virtue? I could see having to restore reputation, but virtue isn’t why she was arrested, is it?
“gutsy but ill-fated”, what does that mean? she’s gutsy but we should know from the get go that this won’t end well for her? That’s kinda anticlimactic in advance, no?
how is withstanding or negotiating through 24 hours with this person going to restore her virtue?
is it just a big coincidence that the anti-social person knows a lot about her? or did they arrange to be locked up with her for a day?
“withstand” isn’t really an active verb. I get the vague sense that the movie is going to be dull based on that. like her job is just to continue existing until someone lets them out. What does she need to DO?
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