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  1. Posted: December 2, 2012In: Public

    A teenage girl tries to stop her school teacher from marrying her mum after she mistakingly thought he kidnapped her missing father, not knowing it was his dangerous twin brother

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    Added an answer on December 3, 2012 at 5:51 pm

    Actually i think i have emphasized too much on the girl stopping her mother's marriage.The main plot is all about misjudging her school teacher to be someone dangerous whereas it's the twin brother doing all the havoc. The subplot is finding her father. I think i should remove the aspect of the marrRead more

    Actually i think i have emphasized too much on the girl stopping her mother’s marriage.The main plot is all about misjudging her school teacher to be someone dangerous whereas it’s the twin brother doing all the havoc. The subplot is finding her father. I think i should remove the aspect of the marriage in the logline as you suggested. Thanks and i never would have thought about adding a description to the main character. A devastated teenager, anxiety ridden teenager, all sounds better and would make more sense. Thanks again

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