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Hunting a dangerous fugitive in 13th century England, a group of mercenaries led by a disgraced knight must brave a surreal frozen hellscape in order to bring their prey to justice.
Does the mercenary have any particular advantage in the frozen hellscape? Otherwise it does sound a little unbalanced - 1 fugitive versus a group. The longer the search goes on, mercenaries could die until it's just the fugitive and the disgraced knight left?
Does the mercenary have any particular advantage in the frozen hellscape? Otherwise it does sound a little unbalanced – 1 fugitive versus a group. The longer the search goes on, mercenaries could die until it’s just the fugitive and the disgraced knight left?
See lessAs a wildfire advances, an inexperienced deputy sheriff must evacuate his town and protect it from looters.
I'm scrapping this logline. Thanks all for your help and advice.
I’m scrapping this logline. Thanks all for your help and advice.
See lessAs a wildfire advances, an inexperienced deputy sheriff must evacuate his town and protect it from looters.
I'm from England and had never heard of Mayberry RFD. Just googled it and it looks terrible. I am starting to consider pursuing a new logline. This is why I really like this process as it helps me nail down what I want to write before scrapping at a later stage and wasting loads of time. I tweaked iRead more
I’m from England and had never heard of Mayberry RFD. Just googled it and it looks terrible. I am starting to consider pursuing a new logline. This is why I really like this process as it helps me nail down what I want to write before scrapping at a later stage and wasting loads of time.
I tweaked it based on feedback:
“With the town sheriff taken ill, his inexperienced deputy must oversee a wildfire evacuation but his loyalty is tested when his wayward brother starts looting homes.”
But I’m not so sure anymore.
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