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  1. Posted: August 25, 2015In: Public

    On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew.

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    Added an answer on August 25, 2015 at 4:41 am

    No problem, I've learnt from this site that literally every single word counts. Update the logline and resubmit it and I'm sure you will get plenty of good advice.

    No problem, I’ve learnt from this site that literally every single word counts. Update the logline and resubmit it and I’m sure you will get plenty of good advice.

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  2. Posted: August 25, 2015In: Public

    On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew.

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    Added an answer on August 25, 2015 at 4:38 am

    This logline leaves far too many questions as opposed to giving us an idea of the story. - Who is 'the family?' Do you mean 'a family? or even the Mafia?!! - What is the 50 year anniversary of their favourite uncles? I dont understand what that means. Is it a same sex wedding anniversary between twoRead more

    This logline leaves far too many questions as opposed to giving us an idea of the story.

    – Who is ‘the family?’ Do you mean ‘a family? or even the Mafia?!!
    – What is the 50 year anniversary of their favourite uncles? I dont understand what that means. Is it a same sex wedding anniversary between two uncles?
    – What kind of issues are we talking about? Homophobia?

    I genuinely have no idea what this is about so I apologise if I am way off base here.

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  3. Posted: August 23, 2015In: Public

    The true life misadventures of a couple who try to save their failing marriage and reignite their dull sex life and relationship by daringly moonlighting as an ?escort duo? and experiencing the fantasies of others.

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    Added an answer on August 25, 2015 at 3:57 am

    dpg - thanks for the stats, really interestings

    dpg – thanks for the stats, really interestings

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