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An art forgery expert is set on an involuntary adventure that promises to solve an old crime and reveal the secret of her vanished family, all this after a mysterious man delivers an unusual package to her apartment.
The 'involuntary adventure' sounds like a passive MC who rather than takes action, is merely reacting. Personally, I would avoid this type of character - you want your MC to be the driving force.
The ‘involuntary adventure’ sounds like a passive MC who rather than takes action, is merely reacting. Personally, I would avoid this type of character – you want your MC to be the driving force.
See lessOn the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew.
As long as you keep the word count 25-35 words, including these extra bits of info helps clarify the story details. It wont be a synopsis. It needs to imply what happens in the beginning, middle and end (but no spoilers). Who is the main character? Is it the nephew or one of the uncles? The best logRead more
As long as you keep the word count 25-35 words, including these extra bits of info helps clarify the story details. It wont be a synopsis. It needs to imply what happens in the beginning, middle and end (but no spoilers).
Who is the main character? Is it the nephew or one of the uncles? The best loglines tend to have one main character who drive the plot.
See lessOn the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew.
It would be interesting to know what the issues are so that we get an idea of the subject matter, the stakes, the theme? You also say 'some' not all, so who are the some?
It would be interesting to know what the issues are so that we get an idea of the subject matter, the stakes, the theme? You also say ‘some’ not all, so who are the some?
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