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After a land survey reveals that her fence is in the wrong place, a homeowner, unwilling to lose part of her backyard, wages war against her neighbor ? no matter what the law says.
My issue with this logline is that it sounds far too mundane and normal. Also, the main character is in the wrong (the law says) but their desire to pursue the matter makes them seem unreasonable and someone I would struggle to emphasise with. I dont have to like them but I need something to hang onRead more
My issue with this logline is that it sounds far too mundane and normal. Also, the main character is in the wrong (the law says) but their desire to pursue the matter makes them seem unreasonable and someone I would struggle to emphasise with. I dont have to like them but I need something to hang on to such as empathy.
Just thinking out loud – maybe our main character is an accident prone soccermom who accidentally kills her neighbour during a dispute and the victim turns out to be the brother of a notorious crime boss.
See what I mean about adding a hook to make it seem more interesting and exciting?
See lessWhen the first time travel ship crash lands in the prehistoric era, the crew have 3 days to fix the ship before the asteroid that wiped out the dinosaurs strikes ? exactly where they are stranded.
Why's that?
Why’s that?
See lessWhen the first time travel ship crash lands in the prehistoric era, the crew have 3 days to fix the ship before the asteroid that wiped out the dinosaurs strikes ? exactly where they are stranded.
okay so I'm having a bit of fun with this one, to see if it has legs. It just popped in my head and I had to share it.
okay so I’m having a bit of fun with this one, to see if it has legs. It just popped in my head and I had to share it.
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