1. Posted: April 16, 2012In:

    A deaf teenage rock cellist struggles to find her musical voice after the death of her mother.

    uDawnWrite

    I like this logline, but I think you should add, after losing her mother to cancer, a car accident, to murder, etc.... IMO, I think it's important, unless you want to keep it a mystery.

    I like this logline, but I think you should add, after losing her mother to cancer, a car accident, to murder, etc…. IMO, I think it’s important, unless you want to keep it a mystery.

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  2. Posted: April 17, 2012In:

    When a senior police officer who does everything by the book sees her daughter being stabbed to death, what side of the law will she now be on!

    uDawnWrite

    I agree with Shark... Maybe if you work helplessly witness her daughter being stabbed. They went to the fair, and the cop was in the Ferris wheel, and her daughter ran off to the bathroom and while the cop was high up on the Ferris wheel she sees her daughter being stabbed in the distance, but unablRead more

    I agree with Shark… Maybe if you work helplessly witness her daughter being stabbed.

    They went to the fair, and the cop was in the Ferris wheel, and her daughter ran off to the bathroom and while the cop was high up on the Ferris wheel she sees her daughter being stabbed in the distance, but unable to reach her in time…. the possibilities are endless.

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  3. Posted: April 15, 2012In:

    When a famous Italian detective investigates the death of the daughter he didn\'t know he had, he uncovers more than just murder in this small, immigrant, upstate New York town.

    uDawnWrite

    This logline says a lot without giving away too much. I didn't even pay attention to the genre you listed, and it describes Murder mystery exactly. Something I most definitely would like to see in the near future. The only word I would remove is immigrant, unless the strange happenings have somethinRead more

    This logline says a lot without giving away too much. I didn’t even pay attention to the genre you listed, and it describes Murder mystery exactly. Something I most definitely would like to see in the near future. The only word I would remove is immigrant, unless the strange happenings have something to do with their culture.

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