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A dedicated and passionate elementary school teacher attempts to win over his female co-worker but a sexual experience forced upon by a guy challenges everything in his life.
"sexual experience forced upon by a guy" Kinda sounds like rape... although rape is such a harsh word, but it sounds like rape too me.
“sexual experience forced upon by a guy” Kinda sounds like rape… although rape is such a harsh word, but it sounds like rape too me.
See lessA dedicated and passionate elementary school teacher attempts to win over his female co-worker but a sexual experience forced upon by a guy challenges everything in his life.
Your premise has vanished. You have it in your original logline (attempts to win over his female co-worker). You could say: "Has to keep his Bi-curious past from his fiance he's about to marry" Just a suggestion, this all still new to me.
Your premise has vanished. You have it in your original logline (attempts to win over his female co-worker).
You could say: “Has to keep his Bi-curious past from his fiance he’s about to marry” Just a suggestion, this all still new to me.
See lessA headstrong ex-con desiring a family, falls for the woman who saves his life, but her drug addiction and past horrors may destroy everything.
Thanks James, but her past horrors is her childhood horrors, and my screenplay does have a twist in ACT III. I want to show my Protagonist trying to help his lady through her problems, although she's avoiding talking about her childhood. I'm trying to get away from the typical black themed movies wiRead more
Thanks James, but her past horrors is her childhood horrors, and my screenplay does have a twist in ACT III. I want to show my Protagonist trying to help his lady through her problems, although she’s avoiding talking about her childhood. I’m trying to get away from the typical black themed movies with violence, and gangbanging, and all that other stuff. My Protagonist pursues her and wins her over towards the end of ACT I. He think’s she’s perfect, but we know she’s not. He will start to see something aint’ right with her beginning ACT II. I want to show my character trying to move mountains for this lady… but everyone has a boiling point.
See lessI’m still working on my logline, but I do think I’ve touched on the basics that make up a logline. It took me a few times to understand that… but hopefully I got it… Thanks to Karel