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  1. Posted: April 24, 2012In: Public

    After an organic supercomputer goes haywire and hijacks all of the world?s computer systems, its scientist creator must stop the crazed machine before it kills him.

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    Added an answer on April 25, 2012 at 11:26 am

    I agree with Paul, great logline, and yes a better description of the Scientist would enhance it better. Is he a deranged Scientist wit a God complex....

    I agree with Paul, great logline, and yes a better description of the Scientist would enhance it better. Is he a deranged Scientist wit a God complex….

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  2. Posted: April 24, 2012In: 01, Public

    While posing as a street person at night to scam people, a conniving ad executive is faced with his greatest fears when he loses everything and becomes homeless himself!

    uDawnWrite
    Added an answer on April 25, 2012 at 11:19 am

    The reason for him becoming homeless is part of the mystery, great pitch to make someone request your script to learn more....

    The reason for him becoming homeless is part of the mystery, great pitch to make someone request your script to learn more….

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  3. Posted: April 24, 2012In: 01, Public

    While posing as a street person at night to scam people, a conniving ad executive is faced with his greatest fears when he loses everything and becomes homeless himself!

    uDawnWrite
    Added an answer on April 24, 2012 at 5:54 am

    Very interesting logline. Sounds like your protagonist/antagonist will learn alot from this experience. I'm no expert, but your logline gives a great visual, I can see the whole movie which is good IMO.

    Very interesting logline. Sounds like your protagonist/antagonist will learn alot from this experience. I’m no expert, but your logline gives a great visual, I can see the whole movie which is good IMO.

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