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  1. Posted: April 20, 2012In: Public

    Down and out L.A. "Jewish" Attorney can't get a break and he bends the rules and his life takes a fast turn through a dark world.

    uDawnWrite
    Added an answer on April 23, 2012 at 8:12 pm

    Down and out L.A. "Jewish" Attorney once falsely accused of treason, can't catch a break, bends the rules, and his life takes a fast turn through a dark world. I added Treason because you put quotations around "Jewish"... so ethnicity must be an important part of your screenplay. But if you're JewisRead more

    Down and out L.A. “Jewish” Attorney once falsely accused of treason, can’t catch a break, bends the rules, and his life takes a fast turn through a dark world.

    I added Treason because you put quotations around “Jewish”… so ethnicity must be an important part of your screenplay. But if you’re Jewish, and your script is a Jewish based film, then I wouldn’t even mention a “Jewish” Attorney, it should show in your script.

    My screenplay is a Black (African American) based Screenplay, but I don’t refer to my Protagonist, ” A headstrong “Black” ex’con.. blah blah blah. After reading a page or two, you will get the feel that he is black. IMO 🙂

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  2. Posted: April 20, 2012In: Public

    An undesirable Sexaholic who struggles to have sex meets a fellow, female, sex addict who teaches him other dangerous methods to starve off his addiction.

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    Added an answer on April 23, 2012 at 7:54 pm

    "An undesirable Sexaholic who struggles to have sex, meets a recovering female sex addict who teaches him dangerous methods to overcome his addiction." ...and maybe give him a little bit on the side... lol, just kidding. :)

    “An undesirable Sexaholic who struggles to have sex, meets a recovering female sex addict who teaches him dangerous methods to overcome his addiction.” …and maybe give him a little bit on the side… lol, just kidding. 🙂

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  3. Posted: April 23, 2012In: Public

    A housewife must harness her newfound paranormal abilities and risk insanity to rescue her son from the possessed doctors and patients of a haunted asylum.

    uDawnWrite
    Added an answer on April 23, 2012 at 7:42 pm

    Hi Kyle, it sounds like you're trying to incorporate two or three movies themes into one. Is this all going to be inside her head, like in "A beautiful Mind"? Not quiet following the logline. Suggestion for Screenplay: She's a medium, but has never explored it because growing up she was frowned uponRead more

    Hi Kyle, it sounds like you’re trying to incorporate two or three movies themes into one. Is this all going to be inside her head, like in “A beautiful Mind”? Not quiet following the logline.

    Suggestion for Screenplay: She’s a medium, but has never explored it because growing up she was frowned upon, called weird, so she hid her abilities. Now that she’s an adult, married with children, She notices her son has the same ability… but tries to protect him from the ridicule she endured as a child. While trying to protect him, Some evil (cult member) teacher whose aware of his ability, causes problems for him, has everyone thinking he’s crazy so he can be locked into the State Asylum, ran by Cult members…. blah blah blah, something like that. 🙂 Again, just a suggestion.

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