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A private investigator who tracks people by dowsing must protect the man a vicious client hires him to find, as they may hold a clue to the origin of his abilities.
When a private investigator with paranormal ability is hired by a vicious Mafia boss to track a fugitive, he then vows to help the man in exchange for information on his own origin.
When a private investigator with paranormal ability is hired by a vicious Mafia boss to track a fugitive, he then vows to help the man in exchange for information on his own origin.
See lessAfter a dancer loses her competition, she turns to a skilled street fighter to up her game for the upcoming competition.
I agree that It is unimportant to know why the dancer lost the competition from the Logline. My objective was just to explain why she would hire a skilled MMA fighter. A dancer is about grace and fluidity, clearly not something you associate with a street brawler. Your hook is that she is hiring somRead more
I agree that It is unimportant to know why the dancer lost the competition from the Logline. My objective was just to explain why she would hire a skilled MMA fighter. A dancer is about grace and fluidity, clearly not something you associate with a street brawler.
Your hook is that she is hiring somebody unexpected to win that challenge. However in the concept of the Logline, that hook has to lead to a “why not, I dig that” reaction rather than a “wtf, that does not make sense” reaction. ?You don’t want your Logline becoming a meme. why not hire a plumber or a skydiver?
You need something in your Logline to tell that hiring that skilled street fighter makes sense.
See lessWhen an archaeologist is killed by a god, a student in mythology finds out and goes on the journey to find the weapon that can kill gods, a grotesque monster made back by a medieval monastery father.
When an ancient God hellbent on world domination takes over his father's body, a mythology student must track a secret society to get the only weapon that can defeat a deity. Having the ancient God taking over his father's body rather than kill doubles the tension while still keeping it personal. CaRead more
When an ancient God hellbent on world domination takes over his father’s body, a mythology student must track a secret society to get the only weapon that can defeat a deity.
See lessHaving the ancient God taking over his father’s body rather than kill doubles the tension while still keeping it personal.
Can he save his dad? And if he can’t ?can he kill him?