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A professional doppelganger of a famous actor, impregnates both his wife and his lover. Using his fame as his currency, he pays a hefty price for adultery.
I am totally confused by that Logline. Who is impregnated the wife and lover of the professional look-alike or the wife and lover of the famous actor? Who is paying a hefty price for his adultery, the famous actor or the look-alike? What does paying a hefty price means? Now on the structure of the LRead more
I am totally confused by that Logline.
Who is impregnated the wife and lover of the professional look-alike or the wife and lover of the famous actor?
Who is paying a hefty price for his adultery, the famous actor or the look-alike?
What does paying a hefty price means?
Now on the structure of the Logline itself, there does not seems to have any idea who is protagonist (the look-alike or the famous actor, nor inciting incident, nor any beginning of a plot.
When both his wife and his mistress fall pregnant, a famous actor tries to get out of this tricky situation by pinning the blame on a professional look-alike.
that version, if the protagonist is the famous actor. The next one if the professional look-alike is the protagonist.
After he is paid to take the blame for the mistress of a famous actor falling pregnant, a professional look-alike vows to protect the woman he was hired to deceive.
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When a deranged sniper starts stalking his ex-girlfriend, a former ninja turned Buddhist monk is tasked by her Godfather to protect her. I like the idea that the hero is a reformed character, and has left his violent past behind. The Godfather is now arm twisting him back into a life he chose to leaRead more
When a deranged sniper starts stalking his ex-girlfriend, a former ninja turned Buddhist monk is tasked by her Godfather to protect her.
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When a dancer loses a competition and her sponsors for being too unimaginative, she must convince an expert MMA fighter to ?instill discipline and teach her new moves for the upcoming dance contest: her last chance to qualify for the National Championship.
a little too wordy, but I have tried to add tension with a clear goal and stated stakes: her last chance to qualify for the Championship.
See lessi have swapped skilled street fighter for expert MMA fighter. To me Street Fighter conjures the idea of brawler, not necessary the kind of people you would associate with discipline and hard work. BTW, I initially thought that you meant skilled street fighter as in the console/arcade game, I was wondering how a eSport specialist could help her at dancing.