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After spending one boy?s student loans to get to a cross-country video game tournament, a ragtag group of teammates must win to get any chance of getting home.
What you have is sort of the gist of it. As pertaining to the title, it is exactly what it is. I'm sure we've all spent our youth doing hedonistic pleasures instead of real work, and this is what the story is about. Both the road-trip and the tournament have elements that see this protagonist (and hRead more
What you have is sort of the gist of it.
As pertaining to the title, it is exactly what it is. I’m sure we’ve all spent our youth doing hedonistic pleasures instead of real work, and this is what the story is about. Both the road-trip and the tournament have elements that see this protagonist (and his friends) grow.
The boy, fed up (or disillusioned) with the notion of work, school, the contemporary american dream, decides instead of using his money for studying, he’s going to use it doing what he enjoys the most – playing video games with his friends, and just all around hedonism.
He drags his friends along when he gets the first chance to escape, and the road-trip is filled with obstacles within and outside of the group.
I like your logline as it straightens out the more important elemens in my story, however I think it needs to have a little more individualistic elements as pertaining to my main character (and his supporting cast of friends).
I’ll keep working on it!
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The game would most likely be in the vein of shooters such as Call of Duty, Halo, or maybe sports games such as NHL or NBA. Something that is more in like with a 5-on-5 setting. Although the sole reason for that for the coming of age elements. 5 different people who've met online and grow together aRead more
The game would most likely be in the vein of shooters such as Call of Duty, Halo, or maybe sports games such as NHL or NBA. Something that is more in like with a 5-on-5 setting. Although the sole reason for that for the coming of age elements. 5 different people who’ve met online and grow together as people by the end of the movie, etc etc. It’s more of a road-trip/coming-of-age/good-will-hunting esque than the logline would suggest, which is why I have trouble with it.
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Hey, I hope this is better than the last one. However I would like some help in adding something else. The idea really involves more coming-of-age elements then the ones shown above, is there any way to include some of that without making it too long? Or rather as it is simply a logline would peopleRead more
Hey, I hope this is better than the last one. However I would like some help in adding something else.
The idea really involves more coming-of-age elements then the ones shown above, is there any way to include some of that without making it too long?
Or rather as it is simply a logline would people not care about that and rather just hear an interesting pitch?
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