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  1. Posted: September 23, 2012In: Public

    Car Pool is an action thriller set in a leafy suburb in the Mid West of America and follows Emily ,a proud struggling single mom who, when locked in a new car that is rigged with explosives, must drive the car into the heart of New York before the kidnappers execute her family.

    walterwhite
    Added an answer on September 23, 2012 at 9:10 pm

    I like the cut down version you supplied and personalising the family element. Her pride is her perceived strength and yes, ultimate flaw. She falls into trouble by not allowing anyone to help her... Ultimately the film is Phone Booth in a car as the kidnappers are watching her every move... It is iRead more

    I like the cut down version you supplied and personalising the family element. Her pride is her perceived strength and yes, ultimate flaw. She falls into trouble by not allowing anyone to help her…

    Ultimately the film is Phone Booth in a car as the kidnappers are watching her every move…

    It is in treatment phase and is on the production line with a lot of others….thanks for the feedback!

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