1. Posted: March 30, 2019In:

    TITLE: A Psycho In The Cockpit. LOGLINE: A psycho in the cockpit. STORY IS ABOUT: A Psycho in the cockpit.

    Wayne Logliner

    That's not a logline, it's a TAGLINE, but a good one! :)

    That’s not a logline, it’s a TAGLINE, but a good one! 🙂

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  2. Posted: March 31, 2019In:

    After getting injected with a rage serum, the injected man must use his new found abilities to stop a rich vengeful businessman from flooding the streets with his serum to destroy the city.

    Wayne Logliner

    Both characters seem pretty angry? a bit same same.? I guess it?s good for a hero to mirror the villain, but I don?t really understand the hero?s motivation.

    Both characters seem pretty angry? a bit same same.? I guess it?s good for a hero to mirror the villain, but I don?t really understand the hero?s motivation.

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  3. Posted: March 28, 2019In:

    Tired of being his 24/7 gopher, a workaholic lawyer gives her playboy boss two weeks notice only to fall in love with him while finding her replacement.

    Wayne Logliner

    Re the long version: Why would a lawyer care about a community centre?? Doesn?t seem like high stakes. Re the short version:? Is confusing as to WHO will find her replacement.

    Re the long version: Why would a lawyer care about a community centre?? Doesn?t seem like high stakes.

    Re the short version:? Is confusing as to WHO will find her replacement.

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