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When a group of aspiring screenwriters join a workshop held in an isolated country house, they find themselves prisoners of a perverse guru and they must write a perfect script or face torture and death.
Is there a hero? Maybe mention him/her, instead of the group. I'm not sure why the perverse guru wants to do this. Why? Just a couple of word choice things: Change "found" to 'find", to keep it all present tense. Change "join" to "attend" to keep it more proactive. Good luck. Sounds like an interestRead more
Is there a hero? Maybe mention him/her, instead of the group. I’m not sure why the perverse guru wants to do this. Why?
Just a couple of word choice things: Change “found” to ‘find”, to keep it all present tense. Change “join” to “attend” to keep it more proactive.
Good luck. Sounds like an interesting story!
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