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  1. Posted: October 24, 2012In: Public

    Jaws on the Moors.

    Wilde_at_heart
    Added an answer on October 30, 2012 at 10:04 am

    While this made me laugh, exactly - it's a tagline. Also, as someone with Yorkshire blood, the idea intrigues me but the Moors are known to be pretty deserted. We need to know who the victims would be - a village? A family plus some visitors?

    While this made me laugh, exactly – it’s a tagline. Also, as someone with Yorkshire blood, the idea intrigues me but the Moors are known to be pretty deserted. We need to know who the victims would be – a village? A family plus some visitors?

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  2. Posted: October 27, 2012In: Public

    Hunted by a post-apocalyptic ruling clique, the last survivor of a 21st century longevity experiment must decide whether to destroy the knowledge that had kept him alive for 300 years.

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    Added an answer on October 30, 2012 at 2:03 am

    I agree with the above poster, and think that maybe you could just leave it at "The last survivor of a 21st century longevity experiment must decide whether to destroy the knowledge that had kept him alive for 300 years." Already in that scenario, I want to at least know 'why'... It's a tease at thaRead more

    I agree with the above poster, and think that maybe you could just leave it at “The last survivor of a 21st century longevity experiment must decide whether to destroy the knowledge that had kept him alive for 300 years.”
    Already in that scenario, I want to at least know ‘why’… It’s a tease at that point, but one that would compel me to ask further at any rate.

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  3. Posted: October 29, 2012In: Public

    When the woman he loves is murdered by a cult, an alchemist in 18th Century France, the charismatic Count St Germain, becomes an immortal assassin in a tale of revenge, redemption and adventure.

    Wilde_at_heart
    Added an answer on October 30, 2012 at 1:55 am

    I'd stop after 'assassin' and leave that latter bit for the pitch letter. He was a fascinating character though. Maybe 'seeks his revenge by becoming an immortal assassin'....

    I’d stop after ‘assassin’ and leave that latter bit for the pitch letter. He was a fascinating character though.

    Maybe ‘seeks his revenge by becoming an immortal assassin’….

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