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A sensitive murderer character of a novel faces agonizing dilemma when a mysterious reader wreaks havoc in the fictional world, forcing him to kill his friends as an exchange for letting him enter reality and start a new life.
Pretty much ditto what everyone else said, but I really think this is a rad sounding premise. I think it also has a lot of potential in terms of questioning free will, since a fictional character only has as much will as the author allows and going to the real world would grant free reign. If that'sRead more
Pretty much ditto what everyone else said, but I really think this is a rad sounding premise. I think it also has a lot of potential in terms of questioning free will, since a fictional character only has as much will as the author allows and going to the real world would grant free reign. If that’s what you’re going for, I’d say phrase it to reflect that and show what the character wants out of being in the real world.
See lessCharlie, a translator, finds his wife has been murdered and turned into an undead shadow creature. He must interpret her speech and discover the mystery behind her death.
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See lessCharlie, a translator, finds his wife has been murdered and turned into an undead shadow creature. He must interpret her speech and discover the mystery behind her death.
The shadow creatures (called noir) is basically the same person personality wise as they were living, just with shadow abilities and their speech becomes static noise when they're excited over something (like, say, talking about their death). Same thing happens when they write--the writing becomes sRead more
The shadow creatures (called noir) is basically the same person personality wise as they were living, just with shadow abilities and their speech becomes static noise when they’re excited over something (like, say, talking about their death). Same thing happens when they write–the writing becomes scribbled the more emotional they are over it. I’d compare them more to ghosts than I would zombies.
I suppose looking at that, it’s probably not needed to call them undead, since I already said she was murdered. Perhaps taking that out would clarify it further?
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