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This is a good setup.? I think it's attention grabbing and amusing.? But you need a goal here for the farmer.? Now that he's able to communicate with the animals, I guess you want him to stop their evil plans and save the world.? It'd be nice if it was a little more interesting than that, but it's better than just saying what he discovers the goats are up to.? As of now, I'd definitely want to see the trailer, but I'm not convinced you have a worthwhile story yet.