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I think it's a great logline and concept. I would change "other self gets". That seems a bit clumsy and confusing, enough to distract from the greatness of that story idea!
Geno Scala (sharkeatingman), judge
If he's found a parallel-universe then the question becomes how? Is he a scientist? Its a bit breaking bad, but you could say "When a scientist-turned-bankrobber finds...".
If he's a bank-robber than we can assume he is ruthless... so perhaps there's a way of getting more shading to his character with this adjective?
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