The Count St Germain
Alan SmitheePenpusher
After a secret cult of assassins kills the woman he loves, a charismatic alchemist in 18th Century France must hunt the assassins down before they kill him.
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The plot of this seems quite generic, feel like it has been used many times and want to know something unique that will make this different to other films. You could perhaps say because it is in 18th Century France but in my eyes that doesn’t seem enough. Why are they up for assassination? Is it a mistake? Are they bad people themselves? The basic premise is there but I want to know more.
Hi Kriss, thanks for the feedback! Yes, I think in my attempts to simplify the story I also “generified” it. I will have a go at putting some interest back in.
Hi Kriss, I’ve submitted another logline for the same movie. Would love your thoughts. Cheers!