With Phillip feeling like Barbra has let herself go, he gets another heavy load on his back, literally, when he finds out that she has entered them into the Wife Carrying Contest in hopes that it will revitalize their marriage.

I really don't like the new motivation in this version of the logline.

"A husband feels his wife has let herself go." will probably turn off every woman reading it. (And the purpose of a logline is to sell people into watching not turn them away)

I think you should stick with something like, "With their marriage struggling..." as the motivation.

I've heard yes and no so many times regarding the use of names in loglines, I'm not even sure what the "rules" are anymore.

It's your logline, I say do what you like.

Thank you so much and your logline is perfect. Can I use names though, meaning Phillip only?