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Tor Dollhouse
Posted: December 20, 20122012-12-20T13:42:14+10:00 2012-12-20T13:42:14+10:00In: Public

When a flourishing actress plans to murder her teenage heartthrob, she sleeps her way through Hollywood, before his final Premier.

Starfuckers, Inc.

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    1. [Deleted User]
      2012-12-20T15:10:05+10:00Added an answer on December 20, 2012 at 3:10 pm

      What is this actress’s motivation?

      And are you really planning on using that title?

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    2. Tor Dollhouse
      2012-12-20T16:48:22+10:00Added an answer on December 20, 2012 at 4:48 pm

      She is an obsessive who wants only him for herself. He was her first teen love / heart-throb and the reason she became an actress. She has to sleep her way through the Hollywood hills, connecting the dots to get to him. I want to change the ticking clock too as I feel there needs to be more urgency.

      Sure am. If the blacklist can say fuck count me in. : )

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    3. [Deleted User]
      2012-12-20T18:28:08+10:00Added an answer on December 20, 2012 at 6:28 pm

      If that’s her motivation, it needs to be in the logline. Also, if she is so obsessed with him, why does she want him dead? You’re going to need to put that in there too.

      You rarely (i.e. never) see a cinema marquee including the word ‘fuck’, unless you plan on this being destined for the “arthouse” circuit.

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    4. cicpisces
      2012-12-20T20:24:34+10:00Added an answer on December 20, 2012 at 8:24 pm

      Yeh, not sure about the motivation here. Sounds like it could be more of a horror. If she kills the men she sleeps with in her attempts to get to him. Not sure why she has become so disturbed either. Is it something he did to her? The fact he was the reason she became an actress isn’t clear.

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    5. debbiemoon Penpusher
      2012-12-21T07:38:00+10:00Added an answer on December 21, 2012 at 7:38 am

      What’s the tone here? Horror, black comedy?

      I don’t think you should worry at all about the title. If people don’t like it, it’ll get changed at some later date. For now, it’s striking and memorable.

      I think we need to know why she wants him dead, and why sleeping her way through Hollywood is going to accomplish that. Why is she killing him at the premiere?

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    6. Tor Dollhouse
      2012-12-21T17:49:25+10:00Added an answer on December 21, 2012 at 5:49 pm

      It’s a Lolita-esqu neo noir with black dramedy elements : )

      “When an obsessed actress…”

      Time to hit the think tank again as I feel the concept is plagued by confusing elements and mediocrity. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and pushing me to do better 😀 p.s Im still keeping the name!

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