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Posted: September 10, 20202020-09-10T08:57:22+10:00 2020-09-10T08:57:22+10:00In: Romance

When a determined Papuan girl falls for a graduate with a fatal illness she convinces him to flee his crazy fiancé and allow her Medicine man grandfather to heal him and have him accepted by her people.

When a determined Papuan girl falls for a graduate with a fatal illness she convinces him to flee his crazy fiancé and allow her Medicine man grandfather to heal him and have him accepted by her people.
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    1. Karel Segers Samurai
      2020-09-12T06:52:17+10:00Added an answer on September 12, 2020 at 6:52 am

      It sounds more like a novel than a movie, Leon.

      The only action here by your Papuan girl hero is ‘to convince’ her lover. This is likely not sufficient to sustain a second act.

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    2. IvyEight6 Penpusher
      2020-09-10T12:57:16+10:00Added an answer on September 10, 2020 at 12:57 pm

      What a great story? I hope it comes to life.

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