Ferocious identical twins Reggie and Ronnie Kray are at the top of London’s criminal underworld. Stopping at nothing to maintain their dominance, establishing themselves as two of the most feared and respected gangsters in London’s history.

Consider the following:
1. Dig the ferocious duo protags.
2. A worldbuilder may help as this is a period piece.
3. Do they start at the top, fall, then return?
4. As a reader, I know the goal, but not the Major Event – call to action.
5. From your synopsis the opposition is a rival gang or a detective, this is not referenced in the logline.
6. Click the Formula link in the header for help.

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