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There's way too much vagueness after the beginning. Take's on America's scars? Is that his woman's name? Is it the country of America? Risking everything to change the course of history how? It's just too abstract all the way around.
>>>risking everything to change the course of history
What does "change the course" of history *look* like on a movie screen? IOW: what is the specific, concrete, objective goal he wants to accomplish?