Penpusher
Posted: 2015-11-24T08:06:50+10:00 In:

While investigating a string of mutilations, the ruthless leader of a post apocalyptic settlement must unravel a brutal plot to overthrow him.

While investigating a string of mutilations, the ruthless leader of a post apocalyptic settlement must unravel a brutal plot to overthrow him.
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    1. Logliner

      While investigating a string of mutilations, the ruthless leader of a post apocalyptic settlement must unravel a brutal plot?[LEAD BY WHO?]?to overthrow him.

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    2. Singularity

      And I hope the plot to overthrow him succeeds!? Why should I? not want him to be overthrown?? Why should I not want to pass on investing my time and money in the story of a seemingly unlikable protagonist?? What’s the hook in the concept that should engage my interest, loosen the grip on my wallet?

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    3. Penpusher

      Interesting concept. A few comments, though: If you say the leader is ruthless, the audience would not be on his side, they would actually want the plot to succeed. Maybe if the leader wasn’t ruthless, just ” tough ” would do… In which case, why would anyone want to overthrow him? Perhaps the plot is led by an outside force… And maybe the leader should change during the story/script (character arc) from being tough, ruthless, to being a better man and a better ruler(not necessarily nicer, just better)…

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