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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: April 13, 20122012-04-13T12:44:04+10:00 2012-04-13T12:44:04+10:00In: Public

An unemployed biologic weapons scientist creates a love potion and then is chased by the FBI as an international terrorist.

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    1. SQM
      2012-04-13T15:58:43+10:00Added an answer on April 13, 2012 at 3:58 pm

      I love it!
      It takes a moment for it to sink it, but then BAM! OMG! That is hilarious!

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    2. uDawnWrite
      2012-04-13T17:51:32+10:00Added an answer on April 13, 2012 at 5:51 pm

      I’m assuming this is a Romantic Comedy, or at least a Comedy. So is the love potion going to bring piece and harmony among bickering countries, and is that the reason why the FBI is after the Scientist? This is what I gather from the logline, which sounds very interesting.

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    3. [Deleted User]
      2012-04-13T23:08:16+10:00Added an answer on April 13, 2012 at 11:08 pm

      uDawnWrite has raised a good question. What is the genre? It needs to be unequivocally clear.

      And if there’s a love potion, I’d expect a love story. If there is one, do include it in the logline.

      Finally: surely the scientist has a specific goal with the love potion (uDawnWrite wanted to know the purpose of it, too). Once his name is cleared, what does our scientist want to achieve with it?

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    4. [Deleted User]
      2012-04-13T23:38:59+10:00Added an answer on April 13, 2012 at 11:38 pm

      Thanks for your feedback…..He makes the potion after seeing his geeky friends
      get rejected at a bar and invents a potion for everyone to buy to meet girls. Also the FBI agents following him think he is selling toxins to terrorists to get even for getting laid-off. The 2 agents a male & female hate each other and of course by the end they come in contact with potion.

      genre – romance comedy no space to post it.

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