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SMITHEREENS II – Sue finally understands her mother’s suicide after her crime cleaning business changes everything.

SMITHEREENS II – Sue finally understands her mother’s suicide after her crime cleaning business changes everything.
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    1. Singularity

      It sounds as if you are telling us the end of the story in this logline. Instead you should give us a glimpse of what led up to this.

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    2. Mentor

      Maybe it s just me but i feel like 5his lacks the basic requirements to be called a logline. Some more work is needed, checking a couple of logline tutorials would help.

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