Sex, drugs, and violence are controlled in the casino club the the CROWD CONTROL team. Fighting with the crowds is the best part of their job. But can they control themselves?

Yes, it reads more like a blurb than a logline.? Loglines imply dramatic questions? but?don't explicitly state them.

And as noted, the logline lacks a?particular protagonist for the audience to identify with,.? And there is no??inciting incident.? And no ?clearly defined goal.? And it lacks a specific adversary or? problem that threatens to defeat the protagonist from achieving the ?goal.

Yes, it reads more like a blurb than a logline.? Loglines imply dramatic questions? but?don't explicitly state them.

And as noted, the logline lacks a?particular protagonist for the audience to identify with,.? And there is no??inciting incident.? And no ?clearly defined goal.? And it lacks a specific adversary or? problem that threatens to defeat the protagonist from achieving the ?goal.

I feel like this is more a tagline than a logline. Usually you don t ask questions in alogline, questions are tagline tools. I d like to have more informations about the main character this goal the source of conflict, the plot.