Haunted by the tragic loss of his estranged father, a young Samoan-American must choose between his corporate job or follow in his late father’s footsteps as the last in a long line of fire-knife dancers.
Categories: Drama
Categories: Drama
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Does it take the length of a feature film -- 2 hrs. -- for him to make his choice? ?Or is the film about what happens after he makes his choice? ?What is the story really about? ?A man who can't make up his mind? ?Or about ?a man returning to his roots, embracing a heritage he forsook for the fools gold glitter of a corporate career?
His decision would make for a great act 1 climax.
Best to plan on shifting the decision earlier in the story and let the resulting action play out as the bulk of the film.
Oh. ?Thanks for the clarification.
I still think that the struggle after he makes his decision would make for a more interesting story than just the struggle to make the decision. ?For me, the short has the felt sense of a quickie. ?It teases, arouses and then ends without a satisfying climax to the foreplay of the premise -- dramatic interruptus. ?Just when the story gets interesting -- it ends.
FWIW. But other's mileage may vary. ?And it's your story.