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EethanSamurai
Posted: June 12, 20162016-06-12T13:56:15+10:00 2016-06-12T13:56:15+10:00In: Drama

When a mega strip joint threatens his and his dead wife?s grave plot, a terminally ill war vet takes a ruthless realtor to Supreme Court to halt construction.

When a mega strip joint threatens his and his dead wife?s grave plot, a terminally ill war vet takes a ruthless realtor to Supreme Court to halt construction.
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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2016-06-12T17:17:02+10:00Added an answer on June 12, 2016 at 5:17 pm

      I think the logline is solid… I am not sure if I am intrigued by the story. But it just may be my taste in movies.

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2016-06-12T22:35:39+10:00Added an answer on June 12, 2016 at 10:35 pm

      When a mega strip development threatens his and his dead wife?s grave plot, a terminally ill vet takes the ruthless realtor to court to halt construction.
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      Like Richiev said. ?This would be a more interesting story if it is ?based on a real case that went all the way to the U.S. Supreme Court. ?And the only way it could get that far is if it involves a Constitutional issue. ?Otherwise, realistically, it will never get heard above the state courts which is why I dropped the reference to the Supremes.

      But if it’s not based upon a real case and ?you know of some arcane legal issue in the premise that would credibly rise to the level of a Constitutional question, then run with it.

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