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Also your title perhaps can be improved, that will intrigue or at least put a smile on one's face when they read it for the first time. For example "Lovely wife awesome life". To that title anyone happily married would agree. I think it would also make a good romantic comedy. Can i ask what is the genre of your logline?

Hi Andrew.The story at first glance didn't move me to anticipate the movie.I agree with sharkeatingman in that it lacks colourful adjectives to enhance the key players role and action that is to come. Obviously happiness varies but what is the inciting incident? What happens to him that turns his life around? Hope it helps. :-)

Being more specific would help this logline shine.

Why is he deemed useless? E.g. He is extremely disorganised, a drug addict, a drunkard, depressed

What makes him decide to find his way into the hearts of people? E.g. His has a near death experience. His father dies. He turns 40.

How does he win people's hearts? E.g. Becomes a world famous piano player.
Coaches a baseball team and wins the world series...

And what is the opportunity?

Hope that helps