A bloodthirsty psychopath traumatized by the murder of his mother forms a group of dangerous terrorists with the goal of avenging his mother and destroying the criminals and gangsters of his town. He is later ought to face a famous and intelligent detective.

Don't understand why the protagonist has to be a psychopath. ?If that's the way he is from FADE IN:, what's his character arc? I think it would be a stronger character arc, make for a more compelling story if he starts out as a normal, law abiding person who succumbs to the dark side of his nature when he begins to engage in "street justice" after failing to get legal justice.

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Don't understand why the protagonist has to be a psychopath. ?If that's the way he is from FADE IN:, what's his character arc? I think it would be a stronger character arc, make for a more compelling story if he starts out as a normal, law abiding person who succumbs to the dark side of his nature when he begins to engage in "street justice" after failing to get legal justice.

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The group the main character forms are people who lost loved-ones the same way he lost his mother , they joined him in order to establish ?their ''law'' and ''justice''. However because of the concept of revenge and their false justice , they are later transformed into a dangerous group of murders who believe nothing but their own lies and policy.