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Ratman
Posted: April 5, 20132013-04-05T00:17:50+10:00 2013-04-05T00:17:50+10:00In: Public

When a space colony team land on a habitable planet, they discover a buried alien race and an object that threatens the fate of their lives – and the earth.

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    1. mmckean
      2013-04-05T04:20:55+10:00Added an answer on April 5, 2013 at 4:20 am

      Cool. Sounds like a film that I would like to see. The only critique I could think of is to possibly mention something about the protagonist(s).

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    2. PeterMack
      2013-04-06T05:53:04+10:00Added an answer on April 6, 2013 at 5:53 am

      Sounds to me a bit familiar – Like Aliens or Prometheus. How can you make it more unique?

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    3. 2013-04-16T02:09:23+10:00Added an answer on April 16, 2013 at 2:09 am

      Solid. Some grammar suggestions. Land should be a singular verb. Buried alien race is a little awkward if you’re trying to convey that the race is extinct. Fate of their lives is really redundant. How about “When space colonists land on a habitable planet, they discover the remains of an alien race and an object that threatens both their lives and the existence of earth.”

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