An egotistical detective fights to save his reputation when a series of religious killings threaten to show the community his true colours.

It's not just a matter of clarity, it's a matter or marketing: the linkage of the crimes to the 10 commandments is your story schtick, your hook, a premise that distinguishes your story from the 1,001 other serial murder mystery scripts piled up script reader's desks.

It's not just a matter of clarity, it's a matter or marketing: the linkage of the crimes to the 10 commandments is your story schtick, your hook, a premise that distinguishes your story from the 1,001 other serial murder mystery scripts piled up script reader's desks.

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