When a dubious Art Director discovers that a new government assurance, is a device to control S.I.F.A., he must rescue his girlfriend from a rogue employer.

Well the assurance is a mandatory rule passed by the government to guard against retna deteriation...blindness ....But theres a neat twist......Read the synopsis..Be interested to see what you think mate...........HIGH CONCEPT...Brother........The device well it's being used for a hidden agenda..........Any more queries.Pretty straight forward stuff.The logline gives you the crux without revealing any insights....There for the script.Happy writing Richiev.............Sure I know the dual protag , antag is daring however because the Government is in cahoots and holds the patent to the L.E.C.S. Pharmacuticals............Chico works at SIFA Art Director..His girlfriend is the head optometrist.......A

Not sure what "...a new government assurance" means. (And how is an assurance a device?)

Also, you set up the government as the bad guy in the beginning of the logline, then add a new bad guy' 'a rogue employer.' I would stick with one antagonist.

Hey Karel can u give me some feedback thx A*** Saving S.I.F.A.